Editing Idea and Pitch Lession

in todays lession we had some time to "tinker" with our idea, we decided who will be playing who, it is going to be me and eather Emre or James conning David. our idea has one flaw and that is that it might over run the 2 minute marker. so at the begining of the lession we thought about how we could change the ending to fit the 2 minute mark. our original idea was for the second bag swap to be a bump into each other, but then we though if David just did a bag swap he would not take the bag out of his sights, also we have to have a shot of him looking into his bag before the second swap so he thinks hes got what he wants. so we decided to make him a runner and not the main drug lord doing the swap. this way he would be lower in the chain of comand and more likely to lose the bag, we then thought that the idea of us "spiking" his drink to make him sick and we swap the bag wile he is throwing up. however though this is a better idea, it is also a longer one, so we think its going to be hard to fit it all in, as a group we have decided to go home and think of ways to shortern it, and we will discuss on thursdays lession.
our back up plan is to film both the longer toilet one, and the one with David going to a shop to buy food and the bags being swaped (swiftly not oviously) we have also decided what the music is going to be, The Stranglers Peaches, we will use a cover version for copyright resions.

The pitch went quite well, we covered everything, but we did have to draw out a blue print so everyone could see how it works. our idea is a working progress, it should have all its final touches on it by the end of thursdays lession.